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Academic Writing Task 1

 

아카데믹 쓰기 Task1에서는 통계화 되어있는 정보를 묘사해야 합니다. 여기서 통계화 되어 있는 정보란, 그래프형식, 차트, 테이블 등을 말합니다. 보여지는 정보에 대한 배경지식이나, 시사적인 사항을 질문하는 것이 아니라, 보여지는 정보에 대한 단순 묘사임을 염두 하여, 20분 동안 150자 분량으로 작성합니다.

 

다음을 참고하시면, 좋은 글쓰기가 될 수 있습니다.

 

Do the following:

 

ü       Writing in the correct style and register

 

ü       Organise your information into paragraphs and construct an effective report

Do not do the following:

 

û        simply copy words and phrases from the question

û        explain every piece of information that is there

û        interpret it

 

아카데믹 쓰기 Task 1에서 범하기 쉬운 오류

          describing the data in great detail but with no analysis

          not demonstrating an understanding of the importance of some of the data

          not demonstrating an understanding of the relationships between different parts of the data

 

예제)  다음은 Academic Module Task 1예제입니다.

            You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 

            The table bellows gives us information about the composition of households

            in a US city between 1975 and 2005.

 

            Write a report to summarise the information by highlighting the main features,

            and make relevant comparisons.

 

            Write at least 150 words.

 

Household type

Total households in 1968

Total households in 2005

Family Households

Married couple                            (with or without children)              67%

Married couple                       (with or without children)             47%

Single parent with children       6%

Single parent with children         10%

Other family members sharing      8%

Other family members sharing                             11%

Non-family households

Single person                                    17%

Single person                      26%

Non-family sharing                     2%

Non-family sharing                   6%

 

다음은 IELTS Band 6.5정도 실력의 답안 예제입니다. Band 6.5이란? 부정확하거나 부적절한 언어를 사용하거나 일부 상황에서는 오해를 하는 경우가 있지만, 그래도 충분한 언어구사능력이 있다고 여겨질 경우 받게 되는 점수입니다. 일반적으로 난이도가 높은 언어를 잘 구사하며 자세한 내용에 대한 이해가 가능한 영어 실력입니다.

  

A student’s answer (Could achieve Band 6.5)

 

As we can see there ha been some changes in the composition of households in a US country between 1968 and 2005. As we live in our greatly changing society, where fast pace lifestyle prevails, it’s quite obvious that some movements were made from traditional households to modern.

 

There are two household types, presented in the table shown: family households and non-family households. Among family households in 1968 there were 67% of married couples (with or without children), while in 2005 this amount was reduced to 47%. Also the amount of households, containing only single parent and child/children was 6% in 1968 and 10% in 1005. Households which consist of other family members sharing also increased from 8% to11% between 1968 and 2005.

 

Among non-family households the average number of single persons was 17% in 1970, which increased to 26% by 205. Non-family households sharing was 2% in 1968 but 6% in 2005.

 

To sum up, it’s quite clear that nowadays the amount of married couples living together in the same home has been greatly reduced. However, the number of parents rearing their children alone was increasing. It clearly showed the trend that people from this particular US city prefer to stay single in 2005 much more than in 1968.

 

(211 words)

 

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